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Hey, just a suggestion on

Hey, just a suggestion on news style--put most important facts in the lead of the story (i.e. 400 people showed up) and the less-important facts lower (Dr. Guliuzza is a PE and a Dr. with degrees from blah, etc.) Try to avoid a chronological news story. Although this story was overall good, chronology usually makes for a boring news story. Most important stuff --> Least important stuff is how things should flow. Keep it up!
Submitted by Anonymous on Thu, 03/26/2009 - 21:21.

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